Snow-Falling-Effect

Sunday, May 08, 2016

वो रुपहली सांझ आये


Top Post on IndiBlogger






                                                                  वो रुपहली सांझ आये  

                                                                   स्वप्न वन में झूलने को 
                                                                   मन की व्यथाएं भूलने को, 
                                                                   स्नेह का मधुमास छाए 
                                                                   वो रुपहली  .... 


                                                                   मन-धरा के भाव उर्वर  
                                                                   कृतित्व के उन्नत शिखर पर, 
                                                                   यश-विधु फिर मुस्कुराये  
                                                                   वो रुपहली   ...... 


                                                                   निर्दोष कौतुक के वसन  में 
                                                                   मन के सूने  प्रांगण में 
                                                                   प्रणय दीपक जगमगाए 

                                                                   वो रुपहली सांझ आये 




रुपहली सांझ -  the argent, silvery dusk                                                                मधुमास - the honeysweet time 
उर्वर -  prolific                                                                                                     कृतित्व  - creativity, vision 
निर्दोष - innocent, naive                                                                                       कौतुक - childlike wonder
वसन  - cloth. here attire                                                                                      यश-विधु - the moon of glory                                             सूने  - empty, lonely                                                                                           प्रणय - romance, love 



Wishing for this argent dusk to descend and liquidate the sorrows into its silver depths. Wishing the dark night to fall to embrace the ugliness of life and switch on the twinkling stars of hope. 
Wishing the earthen lamp of love to be kindled, so what, if by a transient spark ? 
Wishing the innocent childlike wonder to stay, the faith to take a deep hold, make the night earth glow under the lambent moon. 

Harsh unmasking sunrays are still a dream or two away.
 Wishes.. for life:)



Image (Summer Dreaming) : HERE

76 comments:

  1. Wonderfully written soul-sis. I'm so happy to read your post after such a long time! Hope you are doing great....how are the kids?

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Thank you So much for the visit and the concern soul-sis! Everything is fine, it was just me being lazy :P
      Kids are hyper, which is Normal!:D
      AND, and, so glad you liked it :)

      Delete
  2. Beautiful imagery and an excellent message!
    Thanks to Sunita Sriram I am lucky to visit your blog.

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. So glad you liked it! It's me who is grateful to Sunita for introducing you here. Hope, I'd not let her down! Thank You for stopping by :)

      Delete
    2. :))))I am grinning from ear to ear..we are lucky to be drawn to such awesome blogs such as yours...

      Delete
    3. Thank you Sunita! It's my good luck to have nuanced readers dear... And please DO accept my apologies for a late reply!

      Delete
  3. Superb poem. Great theme. And lovely choice of words. :)

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Coming from you, its a sweet reply! Thank you Ravish :) :)

      Delete
  4. Loved the verses and thank you for the translation, some words were indeed hard and difficult:)
    The rose opening to disclose your name was simply awesome...

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. So glad Sunita, for so many things! That you liked it, that you shared it and specifically, you liked the rose opening! That's a quirky thing on my part and you mentioning it proves that bulls and crabs can have life together..so what of a little on the quirky side ! ;) :D Thank you, dear:)

      Delete
  5. मन-धरा के भाव उर्वर
    कृतित्व के उन्नत शिखर पर,
    यश-विधु फिर मुस्कुराये
    वो रुपहली ......
    बेहतरीन , कोकिला जी !!

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Dhanyawad yogi ji! Aapke comments bahut hi utsahvardhan hote hain mere liye..mahatvpoorn bhi! :(

      Delete
  6. Such lovely words Kokila. I hope you are keeping well. x

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Thank you SO much Barbara! Hugs for this one!

      Delete
  7. Hello Kokila,
    Thank you for sharing such a wonderful poem :)

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Thank you Aunt Mary for visiting and stopping by! It's always a pleasure to have you here! ☺

      Delete
  8. Beautiful words very touching!

    ReplyDelete
  9. Ati sundar Kokila. The words flow so soft and smooth. :)

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. It's always a wonderful feeling to know that YOU liked it Somali, and you know it too! I am fortunate to have friends who are so well versed in Hindi too! :☺☺

      Delete
  10. Replies
    1. Many thanks Sanjay..I am real pleased that you liked it! 😊😊

      Delete
  11. That's beautiful Kokila :) Also, you should read, if you haven't already, fiction on the same image at Opal Moon by Rakesh!

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Nomad writer, I know that tale by heart, right from it's inception stage and it's wonderful! Wish, I could write my poem in English as to grasp the nuances of Hindi is far more difficult these days!😊😊 Hope you liked it.😊😊

      Delete
    2. Thank you for stopping by and please, accept my apologies for a freelancer reply!🙃

      Delete
    3. Delayed* not freelancer!🤔🤔 Damn autocorrect!😯

      Delete
  12. This is a beauty ... so picturesque ... loved it :-)

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. So glad you liked it Amrit! Thank you for stopping by to read it!☺

      Delete
  13. Replies
    1. Hello Leena! Meet me, the person who is replying so late that it's a new year now! Accept my apologies for the delay and heartfelt thanks for feeling it as lovely! Thank you, dear!

      Delete
  14. Find the best details about poem at edial to get more information

    ReplyDelete
  15. Man prassan ho gaya yeh kavita padkar. bahut sundar rachna.

    ReplyDelete
  16. अति सुन्दर ! भावपूर्ण ! हृदयस्पर्शी !

    ReplyDelete
  17. Wah wah bestie....kahan milti hai aisi sundarta padhne ko....miss your writings, pls pls be back :) Bohot Bohot dil ko chhu gayi :) bohot khoob.

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. You have been/are the one who is constantly nudging me back to write, bestie.. I am BOUND to be back! Thank you for more than one thing..Hugs.:) :)

      Delete
  18. Beautiful! Thank you also for giving the meaning of key words; saved the time of looking up the dictionary:)

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Am so glad you liked it and that the meanings helped you in understanding it better.Thank you for stopping by, reading, and dropping a, pleasant comment Rajeev!:)

      Delete
  19. So touching, every word like rays of sunshine enlightens the windows of the heart. Bahut badhiya! :)

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Thank You SO much, girl! I am glad you liked it Arti as I know you have a flair for words ..so it means a lot dear:)

      Delete
  20. बहुत ही बढ़िया article लिखा है आपने। ........Share करने के लिए धन्यवाद। :) :)

    ReplyDelete
  21. This is a gem. Awesome creation... Bahut sundar...

    ReplyDelete
  22. So beautifully written Kokila..loved the flow of words :)

    ReplyDelete
  23. Reading you after such a long time.. Worth the wait.. You are harivansh rai bachan of our blogging world..

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. So many thanks, Roohi! coming from you it means a lot and, It is such a Huge thing to say, just hope Mr. Bachhan won't sue me, dear!
      :)

      Delete
  24. waah kya baat hai!
    bahut badhiya :)

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. SO glad you liked it, MS! Thank you! :) :)

      Delete
  25. बेहद सुन्दर शब्द-चयन... उससे से भी सुन्दर संयोजन!
    'वो रुपहली सांझ' अगर पढ़ ले आपकी कविता तो मग़रूर हो जाये...

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Shukriya Amit!
      Filhaal to, aapka comment padhkar mujhko magrooriyat se bachna hai! :D
      Am glad you liked the shabd-chayan and sanyojan.:)

      Delete
  26. Beautiful in both the languages! Double joy actually!

    ReplyDelete
  27. Such a lovely choice of words and the essence of the verse. I really like your pragmatic thoughts and the flow of them poem. Brilliant! :)

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Arey wah! I am pleasantly surprised to see an IT engineer appreciating a Hindi poem Saumy! It's really splendid! Thank You..in millions! :)

      Delete
    2. hehehe...I have a thing for Hindi poetry and trust me the title was enough to grab my attention at first glance.

      Aur IT waale bhi kabhi-kabhi jazbati ho jaate hain. :D :P

      Delete
    3. sach Baat! Actually you are the first IT-ian I have met with a thing for 'hindi poetry', hence I was in for a beautiful surprise! I am glad Saumy... hope we will be in touch through poems. :):)

      Delete
    4. Pucca waala pucca!! Glad to connect with you Kokila. High five! :)

      Delete
  28. Beautifully written Kokila :) And such deep takes with the same photo :D I guess it's one of those that brings out the best in you :) Loved the lines!!!

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Yeah.. it was the image. It had a great emotional impact on me. I still feel this moon as a beautiful gift to a dear one, or like a glass bowl full of boiling milk which the kids are trying to bring down...with the pet yapping in pleasant anticipation!
      Thank you again, shashank!

      Delete
  29. वो रुपहली सांझ तुम्हारे जीवन की हर व्यथा को भुला दे यही आशा करती हूँ - हिंदी की नए शब्द भी सीखे और अच्छी कृतत्व रचना का भरपूर लाभ भी उठाया 🙂❤️

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. बहुत बहुत शुक्रिया, सुनयना। I am unsuccessfully trying to reply you in hindi from past two days but my keypad is not supporting... Finally, in english... Thank you dear girl! I am in need of wishes so,am sweeping every but of yours :) it's always a pleasure to hear from you... Thank-you for stopping by. :)

      Delete

Your views and thoughts make this blog work ...Thanks a lot. :)

You May Also Like

Related Posts Plugin for WordPress, Blogger...