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                                                                           mute anguish of love
                                                                           has silenced forever... that                                                                                                                                                   blithe chime of my heart










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  1. Not ones but I read it several times, the more I read it the more emotional I felt.

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    1. So Many THANKS Swati! I mean it dear as this is one of those post which I posted as a ghost blogger! And because, I too like this one! Hugs!

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    1. Thank you Celestine! It's a late onr but I wanted to reply only after restarting blogging! wishing you a Happy New Year!

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  3. There's a sad note there. But your lines are beautiful as always.
    Long time, girl. How have you been?

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    1. Replying after six months is like beating my own record Dee! So many thanks for always being here and so glad that you liked this one! :)

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    2. Ah!
      I read those lines and there was a feeling of deja vu. And then your comment explained it all. :)
      Hugs!!

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    1. Thank you Yogi! Apologies for a late reply .. wishing you a wonderful New Year :)

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  5. The last line says it all .. wonderful :-)

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    1. Thank You Amrit! Glad you liked it! :)

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  6. This is heart wrenching. Pain is encapsulated in submission.

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    1. So true, Saru! Silence overpowers the giggles!Glad it resonated well with you! :) Thank you girl!

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  7. kaash kuch kah paati......!.....but your words said it all....:)

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    1. Right Sunaina, बस एक सन्नाटा फैला होता है मन में।तुमने सुना उसे, ये बहुत है। :)

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  8. The last line said it all..beautiful ! :)

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  9. The last line said it all..beautiful ! :)

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    1. Thank-you,Renu! It's humbling to be liked by those whom I admire!:)

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  10. Beautiful!
    Khamoshiyaan bhi sunaai deti hain!

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    1. Kuchh khamoshiyan khushi ki har chahak ko duba deti hain MS.. your shayari is a beautiful proof!😐 Glad You felt this one ..🙂

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  11. Lovely Kokila; beautiful I must say:) Nice to see u back!

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    1. Thank You, Rashmi! Glad that you liked it and yes, it was quite a long break and I despised to enjoy it! Will be in touch now.:) :)

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  12. Your haiku has actually left me dumbstruck & speechless... indeed a priceless one! <3

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    1. Feels nice that you liked it much, Maiterni! Thank You for stopping by! :)

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    1. TONS of Thanks Soul-sis.. we hardly ever differ in views and feelings ..:) :)

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  14. This is so beautiful and profound :)

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    1. Coming from a poetess, it's heart gladdening, Purba! Thank you!

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    1. Hey Anjali! So pleased that you liked it ! :)

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    1. Glad that it resonated well with you, Sir.. Thank you! :)

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  17. Once is not enough..
    The more I read it the more I fall in love with it!
    -In mute appreciation..for words fail to convey what I feel!!

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    1. I am so glad AND humbled that you liked it enough for your 'mute appreciation'! I write a lot, and coming from a family of teachers, lecturers and professors, I explain a lot. But, individually I am a person of few words who Always found the silent love to be the strongest and the mute anguish to be the hardest!
      Thank you!

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    2. Am glad to learn about your background which resembles mine...at least a dozen of teaching professionals in my family too!
      BTW it appears you haven't started reading my book; you will relate when you do:)

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  18. ..एक और भी ख़्याल आता है आपके हाइकु पर.. ये सचमुच किसी wind-chime जैसा sound करता है ... चलते-फिरते एक happy feeling और कान लगा कर सुनो तो कोई गहन वेदना!
    आपकी काव्य-कला पर नतमस्तक हूँ!
    ... और अब इस गहन वेदना से उबरने के लिये, write off करने के लिये, प्रस्तुत करता हूँ अपना एक हिन्दी हाइकु जो मैंने अपनी किसी 'बहुत ख़ास' के लिए लिखा था:
    "विंडचाइम
    हूँ मैं और आप हैं
    एटमबम"
    Ha ha:):):D

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    1. I absolutely loved your interpretation of the wind-chime as I felt the same ..ALWAYS.
      I am fortunate to have you as a reader not only sensitive to the feelings, to the underlying current of emotions of words, profound to dissect the layers of meaning but, is also generous to my faults and in-experience! THANK YOU! :)
      And, I am humbled that you chose to present your 'that much special' haiku here on this page! I loved the haiku and if I am not wrong, have sensed the underlying pathos behind the wind-chime and Atom-bomb combo.Lethal indeed to the poor heart:)

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    2. Ha ha:) I did not have enough courage to present it to her, nor has it been published elsewhere so far:) I'm glad you understand what is written between the lines:) Thank you Kokila:)

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  19. wonderful emotional thought ... love it ...

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    1. Many thanks, Sir! Your motivation is much required.:)

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  20. Sad, touching lines. Beautifully penned, Kokila :)

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    1. Thank you, girl! you said this, means, likhna safal hua.:) :)

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  21. Absolutely loved loved loved this! :)

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