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Saturday, February 18, 2017

Shell : Tanka


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                                                                        scattered shells on beach
                                                                        ivory spirals in time 
                                                                        moments lived long back 
                                                                       whorls and spires from ages past 
                                                                       runes of love bygone, forgotten



                                                                   






with HaikuHorizons
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26 comments:

  1. Such an ethereal feeling portrayed through this... loved it <3

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    1. Thank-you beautiful! I am glad you liked it dear! :)

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  2. Beautiful as always, soul-sis <3 Glad to read your amazing words after a long time... :-)

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    1. ...and, am gladder to see you after a long time..my maiden visit is yet to happen on your new place soul-sis! Hugs! :)

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  3. Every single line is beautiful. But my favourite is 'Ivory spirals'.
    Good to visit again, Kokila :)

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    1. Thank-you Nimi! It's really a pleasure to reconnect, to be read by those who will not only understand but, will enjoy too!It keeps ine going. Thank-you, again!

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  4. This is a brilliant and precious read...yes I can really imagine them as the true keepsakes of time. I loved your selection of words too love <3

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    1. Thank-you for the generous appreciation,Roma! I am real happy that you liked it, dear! :) :)

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  5. Beautiful.. Have written recently on moments too :)

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    1. Thank-you soulful! I'll be visiting there soon girl! Hugs!:)

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  6. Beautiful and profound. Loved your choice of words :)

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    1. So glad you loved it, Purba!I look forward to you visiting this place!:)

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  7. I always love your poems...feelings expressed with perfect words.

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    1. Tons of thanks, Ranjana!I am glad you are liking my words! Keep in touch!:) :)

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  8. I always love to raed you Kokila ji . such an ethereal feeling words. you are queen of "tanka" :)

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    1. ..and, I always look forward for your comments! Specially for poems as you enjoy them...Thank you for your generous words, Yogi!

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  9. Every line conveys a beautiful feeling. Amazing, Kokila :)

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    1. Glad you felt so, Kiran! You know that your words matter! :)

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  10. itne bhari bharkam words!
    bahut badhiya!

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    1. Badi badi baaton ke liye!:p
      Glad you liked it, MS!

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  11. Ethereal and exquisite! Absolutely spellbinding!

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    1. THANK-YOU, Amit! A pleasure you liked it!👌

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